Tuesday, December 11, 2012

shitty poetry

I’d like to say,
I made you happy,
But sometimes,
I don’t know,
I keep clinging,
To a version of the past,
Whereas you have,
An aversion to the past,
Because it’s littered with me.
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2 comments:

  1. RachelDecember 19, 2012 at 8:36 AM

    A word of advice: lose the commas (the line breaks serve that function already). Also, I really like the last 3 lines.

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    1. SeanDecember 19, 2012 at 11:11 AM

      I know! Commas are such a bad habit, I don't know why I ever started doing that.

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